Question

8．假如你和几个同学上个星期天外出郊游、野餐．请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记，记下这次愉快的周末郊游．
提示：
1、天气晴朗，爬山很开心；
2、在山顶欣赏美景（enjoy beautiful scenery）、拍照（take photos）；
3、中午在山脚下野餐（have a picnic lunch）、在山谷里玩游戏（in the valley）；
4、西山美丽风光让我们流连忘返（enjoy oneself so as to forget to leave）．
注意：1、词数80-100（开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总数）；
2、短文条理清晰，不可直接全文照搬提示，可适当发挥；
3、文中请勿提及学校和个人的真实信息．
Sunday，May 1st，2016．Clear．
I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday．
                                                            
We had a great time at West Hill．It was a pleasant trip．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 We were happy to climb up to the hill．我们爬山很开心．be happy to do sth．高兴做某事．
高分句型二
 We were busy enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill．我们忙着欣赏美丽的风景，在西山的山顶拍照．be busy doing sth．忙于做某事．

解答 Sunday，March 6th，2016．Clear．
    I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday．
    It was fine．The sun was shining warmly．We were happy to climb up to the hill【高分句型一，注意be happy to do sth．的使用】．【要点一，天气晴朗，爬山很开心】
    The blue sky，white clouds，fresh air，green hills，beautiful flowers，quiet forests，singing birds and flying insects made a beautiful picture at West Hill．We were busy enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill．【高分句型二，注意be busy doing sth．的使用】【要点二，在山顶欣赏美景，拍照】
    At noon，we had a picnic lunch at the foot of West Hill．Then we played games in the valley【要点三，中午在山脚下野餐、在山谷里玩游戏】．Beautiful scenery at West Hill made us enjoy ourselves so much as to forget to leave．【要点四，西山美丽风光让我们流连忘返】
    We had a great time at West Hill．We were tired but happy．It was a pleasant trip．

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