Question

【题目】书面表达

你的大学生活即开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括：

1.确定新的学习目标 2.改进学习方法 3.学会独立生活

4. 处理好与同学的关系

注意：内容要连贯、完整；

词数：120-150(开头已给出不计入单词总数)。

I will go to college in the near future.____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。你的大学生活即开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括：1.确定新的学习目标 2.改进学习方法 3.学会独立生活 4. 处理好与同学的关系。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120-150词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

写作亮点：it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself.这个句子中，it是形式主语；I think I will have a wonderful college life.这里含有一个宾语从句。