Question

15．最近你和你的同学就"Should teenagers follow the fashion？"展开了讨论．现在请你以此为题，参照表内提供的信息，写一篇英语短文．

Your classmates'ideas	Your ideas
=1．can keep up with the times，look smart and fashionable	=1．…
=2．waste money and time，get in the way of the schoolwork	=2．…

注意：
1、开头部分已写好，你只需接着写．
2、所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，和你所补全的两条信息．
3、词数：不少于70个．
Should teenagers follow the fashion？
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about teens'fashion following．…
Some of them think teenagers should follow the fashion because it can help us keep up with the times．And it makes teens look cool and fashionable．But some students disagree．They believe that it wastes time and money．Also it may get in the way of the schoolwork．
In my opinion，following the fashion is good for teens．As we know，teenagers need all-round development．However，the knowledge in books alone has been unable to meet our needs．On the other hand，teenagers are also part of society．Society is always progressing．It's our duty to know what's going on in the world．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"Should teenagers follow the fashion？为题说说就此话题的讨论的结果，并发表自己的观点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．同学们的观点；与时俱进，看起来漂亮时尚，浪费时间和金钱，阻碍学业
2．你的观点
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
get in the way of 挡路，妨碍
be good for 对…有益
on the other hand 另一方面

【高分句型】
1．Some of them think①teenagers should follow the fashion②because it can③help us keep up with the times．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事，keep up with the times与时俱进
2．①In my opinion，②following the fashion is good for teens．
①In my opinion依我看来
②动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．be good for 对…有益
3．①It's our duty to know②what's going on in the world．
①it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的职责，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②what引导的宾语从句．

解答 One possible version：
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about teens'fashion following．Some of them think teenagers should follow the fashion because it can help us keep up with the times．【高分句型】And it makes teens look cool and fashionable．But some students disagree．They believe that it wastes time and money．Also it may get in the way of the schoolwork．（同学们的观点）
In my opinion，following the fashion is good for teens．【高分句型】As we know，teenagers need all-round development．However，the knowledge in books alone has been unable to meet our needs．On the other hand，teenagers are also part of society．Society is always progressing．It's our duty to know what's going on in the world．【高分句型】（我的观点）

点评 本题是写一篇有关中学生是否应该追随潮流的书面表达，写作时我们可以根据讨论的结果说说同学们的意见并表达自己的意见，同时在写作时要注重条理性和层次性，注重语言的准确性和完整性．尽量不要使用错误的短语或句子．