Question

短文写作（12分)

Michael 的朋友 Sam 在学习和生活中遇到以下烦恼，请你以Michael的名义给Tom写一封信来安慰他，并提出你的建议。

信息提示：

一个人不适应新的环境，很孤单。

英语考试没考好很焦虑。

睡眠不好，身体和精神状态很差。

父母不让上网。

放假想去旅行没有钱。

要 求：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，所给信息必须全部用上；

2. 适当发挥，词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear Sam,

How is everything going ? _____________________________________________

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yours,

Michael

 

Answer 1

Dear Sam,

How is everything going ?In your last letter you told me you couldn’t get used to the new environment and felt very lonely.I think it’s normal at first for a person who goes into a new place. You can make some friends and talk or play with them ,if so you will feel better and less lonely.As for your English test,you needn’t be worried about it.You can think why and how you got such a grade.And later try your best to learn English ,I’m sure you can do well in it next time.Enough sleep is important to our health,so you should do more exercise and get enough sleep,then you’ll be in good health and energetic soon.You shouldn’t get online all the time.If you want to get online,you should ask for your parents’ permission,I’m sure they’ll understand you.If you want to travel but have no money,you can borrow some from your parents or friends first,or do some part-time jobs to make some money yourself.

I hope I can help you.

yours,

Michael

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据提示写一篇叙事完整，语句规范的作文。这就要求仔细阅读所给提示，然后考虑用什么样的句子来描述内容画。细节方面就要注意时态，语法以及衔接词的运用等。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把要求的内容叙述清楚，做到了首尾呼应，是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提示性作文。