Question

书面表达（本题有1小题；共计15分）

“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……

假如你班正准备出一期以“我们心中的英雄”为主题的英语墙报，下面是一部分同学们做的一些信息卡，

Dr Norman Bethune Natlonality(国籍): Canada Hobby: taking photos Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; invented medical tools…	Liu Xiang Nationality: China Hobby: singing Main stories: won the first Olympic gold medal in the men' s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne …
Name:_______ Nationality:_____________ Hobby:________________ One main stary:_________

你选择其中一张卡片，也可以选择别的英雄人物，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。

要求：①包含所选信息卡上的内容；②适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；③不能出现表明你身份的信息；④词数80-100词左右，不含已给出部分。(本小题15分)

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version (1)

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart.

He was a great doctor from Canada.

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn't stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

I am deeply moved by his stories. So I'll work hard today and do my best to help others.

One possible version (2)

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004, he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men,s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne.

Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well. With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给定材料作文，要求写一篇介绍“我们心中的英雄”的文章，题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前要根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲。确定句子的时态。关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，要适当表达自己观点。写作中要注意语意通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连词。

【亮点说明】这篇文章使用了一些的固定句型及短语，为文章增色不少。如be good at擅长，so…that如此……以致，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事等等。

考点：话题作文。