Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

假若你是健康专家李教授，你被邀请到一所中学给学生作一场健康方面的讲座，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿。字数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出。

饮食	少吃垃圾食品，多吃健康食品如水果和蔬菜
锻炼	最好有自己喜欢的运动，每星期锻炼2-3次；尽量步行来代替乘车
生活习惯	保持足够睡眠；睡前可听音乐，不要玩电脑游戏或看电视 每天保持心情愉快十分重要

Hi, everyone, today I want to talk about how to keep healthy. I hope my advice will help you.

If you can follow my advice, I am sure you can be in good health. Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, everyone, today I want to talk about how to keep healthy. I hope my advice will help you.You should eat less junk food and eat more healthy food, like fruit and vegetables. It’s better to have your favourite sport and do exercise twice or three times a week. Don’t take a bus if you can go there on foot. I also advise you to have enough sleep. You can listen to music before you go to bed. But don’t play computer games or watch TV. It’s important to be happy every day.

If you can follow my advice, I am sure you can be in good health. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用多种句式，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：You should…、You can…、It’s better to…、以及祈使句、条件句的使用，这为文章增色不少。