Question

假如你是Joe, 你的朋友Dennis转到新的学校后给你来信。他说在新学校老师对他很好，但他没有朋友，功课也学得不太好，因此感到很沮丧，请你给他写一封信，给他提一些建议或忠告，要求80词左右。

Dear Dennis,

I’m glad to get your letter,……

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Dennis,

I’m glad to get your letter, but I am worried about you and I am going to give you some advice to help you out. I know it’s difficult to lead a happy life without friends. But don’t worry about it too much. I think if you try to be nice to everyone, you will make new friends. Why don’t you talk to them about hobbies such as sports? As for your lessons, please believe yourself. Just as the saying goes, “nothing is impossible”. Work hard to catch up with others. It’s a good idea to ask your teachers and classmates for help. I am sure you can do better in your new school. Cheer up and come on!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Joe

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据Dennis所遇到的问题提出合适的建议，这些问题都是学生日常生活中所遇到的问题，难度应该不大。但是在写作时，应该利用所学词组和句型，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了but, as for等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:it’s difficult to do, why don’t you do? ask sb for help等。

考点：提纲作文。