Question

现在上网成了许多学生的主要娱乐方式之一。假如你叫小亮，你上周对所在学校的60名同学(30名男生，30名女生)进行了上网目的调查，下面是你的调查结果，请根据其内容写一封信给校报主编，报告自己的调查结果。

1．报告应包括图表所示内容；

2．叙述调查结果时要避免重复使用百分比；

3. 其中要有表明自己观点的句子；

4．报告中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名；

5．报告应在80词左右。生词：chat(聊天、谈话)。make a survey调查 purpose目的

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Xiao Liang

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

Last week,I made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our school about their purpose of getting on the Internet.Both the boys and the girls like chatting very much.

What the boys like most is playing games and the girls also like it.Both the boys and the girls like to read news or send e-mails through the Internet.Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends.For studying,boys and girls are equal in the number,but only several children will use Internet as a tool to study.So I think we should guide the students to use Internet better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表作文。图表所示数据清晰，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls，about their purpose of getting on the Internet.Both the boys and the girls like chatting very much.What the boys like most is playing games， keep in touch with friends.are equal in the number,use Internet as a tool to study.等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：图表作文。