Question

中考将近，而9年级学生Daniel却遇到了一些问题，准备向21世纪英文报的“知心大姐”栏目反映一下，并希望得到帮助．（14分）

假设你是Daniel．请你用英语给该报“知心大姐”栏目写一封信，希望得到帮助．问题如下：

(1)作业太多，时常熬夜，感到疲劳，尤其是在课堂里就想睡觉；

(2)不知如何处理学习与课余活动之间的矛盾，感到焦虑；

(3)有时甚至与朋友争吵，感觉不开心；

(4)父母只关心考试分数，很少与自己交流，也不关心自己的感受．

注意：

(1)80词左右．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

(2)可适当发挥，使行文通顺连贯．

Dear agony aunt，

I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．

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Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．

Yours，

Daniel

 

Answer 1

Dear agony aunt，

I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．

First I have a lot of homework to do every day, so I often stay up late to complete it. As a result, I feel tired. Second, I don’t know how to achieve a balance between study and play, That’s why I feel stressed from time to time. What’s worse, I sometimes quarrel with my friends, and that makes me feel bad. Besides, my parents care only about the marks and we seldom communicate with each other.

Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．

Yours，

Daniel

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目所给要点比较详细，在写作时一定要把每个要点都表达出来，当然也可围绕主题适当发挥。在写作时可以适当使用连接词，使上下文紧凑，密切关联。本文可以第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】该文使用了first、second、what’s more、besides等词，为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。