Question

11．下面是某中学的学生爱好调查表．请仔细阅读，先描述该调查的结果，然后选择其中两项内容发表你自己的观点，说明赞成或不赞成的原因．单词数在80-100之间．

Hobbies	Agree	Disagree
Surfing the Internet	36	14
Eating snacks	25	25
Favorite singers/movie stars	10	40

注意：1、文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
      2、所写内容必须包括表格中的至少两项并且发表你自己的观点，说明理由；
      3、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名．
参考词汇：in my opinion，intellectual and educated，admire，disagree
We did a survey about middle school students'hobbies among 50students．Here are the results．
First，mostofstudentsagreetosurftheInternet．Asforeatingsuacks，studentsaredividedintotwoparts．Halfagree，andhalfdisagree．What'smore，almostallthestudentsdisagreetoadmiresingers
andmoviestars．Onlyafewpeoplelikethishobby．
Inmyopinion，Idon'tthinkeatingsnacksisbadforourhealth．Forinstance，Wecaneatsomewhenwearehungry．BesidesIdisagreetoadmiresingersormoviestarstoo，becausetheyareonlysomefashionpeopleinsingingoracting．AnotherreasonisthatIpreferpeoplewhoareintellectualandeducated．
Thesearemypersonalopinios．Ithinkwe'dbetterspendmoretimeonusefulthings．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是描述对中学生的爱好的调查结果，然后选择其中两项内容发表你自己的观点，说明赞成或不赞成的原因．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果；上网：36人同意，14人不同意；吃零食：各占一半；最喜欢歌手明星：10人同意，40人不同意
2．自己的观点和理由；

常用到的重点短语：
what's more 再者
be bad for 对…不利
for instance 例如
had better do sth 最好做某事
spend+时间+on sth 花时间做某事
【高分句型】
1．①What's more，almost all the students ②disagree to admire singers and movie stars．
①what's more 再者
②disagree to do sth 不同意做某事
2．①In my opinion，I don't think②③eating snacks is bad for our health．
①in my opinion 依我看来
②think后是省略了that 的宾语从句．
③动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．be bad for 对…不利
3．Another reason is ①that I prefer people②who are intellectual and educated．
①that引导的从句作为表语，和is构成系表结构．
②who作为关系词的定语从句，who作为从句的主语，修饰先行词people．

解答 We did a survey about middle school students'hobbies among 50 students．Here are the results．First，most of students agree to surf the Internet．As for eating suacks，students are divided into two parts．Half agree，and half disagree．What's more，almost all the students disagree to admire singers and movie stars．【高分句型】Only a few people like this hobby．（调查结果）
In my opinion，I don't think eating snacks is bad for our health．【高分句型】For instance，We can eat some when we are hungry．Besides I disagree to admire singers or movie stars too，because they are only some fashion people in singing or acting．Another reason is that I prefer people who are intellectual and educated．【高分句型】（针对吃零食和喜欢明星发表自己的观点和理由）
These are my personal opinios．I think we'd better spend more time on useful things．

点评 做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．