Question

【题目】写作 (计20分)

提示：你们班将于期中考试后参观扬州名胜。请你以班长的名义写一封信，向全班同学发出邀请，并对行程和交通工具做出安排。

要点：1. 上午8：00 校门口集合上车；参观瘦西湖(the Slender West Lake)，个园( the Bamboo Garden)并拍照。

2. 中饭后，到茱萸湾(the Zhu yu Park) 看熊猫并欣赏美景；

3. 傍晚，到东关街购物，品尝扬州小吃， 在DIY商店学做水果色拉。

4. 每人费用100元。参观后会把照片放在网上供同学们浏览。

5．希望每个同学会喜欢本次旅行并玩得开心。

注意：1. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 邀请信须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。

Dear classmates,

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I hope all of you will ha ve a good time then.

Best wishes

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates,

After mid-term exam we’ll visit places of great interest in Yangzhou. At 8:00 a.m. we’ll meet at the school gate and get on the bus. We’ll visit the Slender West Lake and the Bamboo Garden and take some photos.

After dinner, we’ll go to the Zhu Yu Park to see the pandas and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

In the evening, we’ll go to Dongguan Street to do some shopping, enjoy Yangzhou snacks and learn to make a fruit salad in the DIY store.

Remember 100 yuan per person. After the visit I will put the pictures on the Internet for the students to visit.

I hope all of you will ha ve a good time then.

Best wishes

John

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以班长的名义写一封信，向全班同学发出邀请，并对行程和交通工具做出安排。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如places of great interest, take some photos, do some shopping。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。