Question

【题目】书面表达

假如在班会课上，老师要求你介绍自己的家庭情况，请按照以下要点介绍。

家庭位置	离市中心不远的一个小镇,从阳台上可以看到青山绿树。
家庭成员	爸爸：技师，擅长检查、修理电脑。
	妈妈：医生，当人们不适时，会使他们感觉好些。
	自己：社区中心的志愿者，时刻准备伸出援助之手，打算邀请同学去拜访老人。
感受	觉得……（用一句话展开）

Hello, Everyone! Let me tell you something about my family. ________________________________________________________________________________________

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I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

I live in a small town not far way from the city centre. I can see the green hills and trees from the balcony.My father is an engineer. He is good at checking and fixing computers. My mother is a doctor.She will make people feel better when they do not feel well. I am a volunteer at the community centre. I am always ready to help others. I am going to invite my classmates to visit old people. And I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.

【解析】

试题分析：因为短文是介绍自己的家庭情况，所以句子的时态多用一般现在时，要注意主谓一致问题，不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，最后要叙述自己的感受。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：I live in a small town not far way from the city centre. I can see the green hills and trees from the balcony. I am always ready to help others. And I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.用了when引导的时间状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。