Question

11．2013年4月20日四川雅安发生了地震（earthquake），家园、学校受到了损坏．一名灾区的学生赵华下周将来你们班．她将在你们班学习一年．请根据表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你将如何帮助她，并适当写出自己的想法．

Zhao Hua	On schooldays	On weekends
1．Age：13 2．Hometown：Ya'an in Sichuan 3…	1．和她交朋友 2．帮助她… 3．…	1．请她来家里 2．一起… 3．…

注意：1．词数在80-100左右．
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名．
3．根据所给信息做适当的发挥，要求条理清楚，语句连贯，字迹工整．
4．开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
Zhao Hua will come to our school next week．She's from         ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But she couldn't go to school because of the terrible earthquak但是因为地震她不能去学校．
because of…由于…
【高分句型二】
I think we will be very happy together我认为我们在一起会开心．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．

解答 Zhao Hua will come to our school next week．She's from Ya'an in Sichuan．She's 13 years old．She is a middle school student．But she couldn't go to school because of the terrible earthquake．【高分句型一】She'll study with us in our class for a year．（基本情况）As her new classmate，I'll try my best to help her．When she comes，I'll show her around our school and become good friends as quickly as possible．On schooldays，I can help her study because my schoolwork is very excellent．（在学校）Maybe she is lonely on weekends，so I can invite her to my home and have dinner with my family．I want her to feel the warm of family．Then，we can play games or watch TV．I think we will be very happy together．（周末）【高分句型二】I can't wait!

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己如何帮助一名灾区学生．本文做给材料比较详细，叙述中注意将要点中的事情介绍清楚，可以适当取舍．动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容．根据内容可知本文时态问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题，人称主要是第一人称．写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑．