Question

9．根据中文和英文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于60词的文段．请将文段写在答题卡上．
某英文报纸就中学生带手机（cell phones）上学话题征文，请你投稿．
手机在人们生活中扮演着重要角色，许多同学带手机上学．请你谈谈同学们经常用手机做什么，你有什么体会，你对正确使用手机有哪些建议．
daily life，convenient，keep in touch，pass notes，during the class，affect．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more children bring their phones to school越来越多的学生带手机上学．
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
【高分句型二】
Some people think①②it's convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents，so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school．一些人认为对于学生来说和父母保持联系是很方便的，所以学校应该允许学生带手机上学．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Cell phones are very important in our daily life．More and more children bring their phones to school．【高分句型一】At school，students use cell phones to pass notes，read novels and listen to music．Sometimes cell phones ring during the class．Some people think it's convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents，so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school．【高分句型二】（同学们经常用手机做什么）In my opinion，with a cell phone to school will affect the student's attention，students shouldn't bring cell phones to school．They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the school．（体会和建议）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点