Question

6．初中的学习生涯即将结束了．三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯…都有了一定的改变吧！请你一定以（How I Change）为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化好吗？字数在80词左右．
温馨提示：1短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．2这些词汇也许对你有帮助：hobby，habit，used to，enjoy oneself3短文开头已经为你写好（字数不计入总数），请你接着往下写．
                             How I Change
   My life has changed a lot in the past three years．…            ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文．主要写在三年的初中学习生涯中，自己在获取知识的同时，在外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯等方面的改变．
【重点短语】be interested in在…感兴趣； spend most of time on在…花费大量时间； be worried about 担心…
【重点句型一】I was fat and short when I came to the middle school．在我刚进入中学时我又胖又矮．这是when引导的状语从句．
【重点句型二】I become taller and stronger than before．我变得比以前更高更强壮．这是一个比较句型．become …than before变得比以前更…注意使用比较级．

解答 How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years．【开篇点题】I was fat and short when I came to the middle school．【重点句型一】At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it．【最初的外貌及兴趣】My parents were worried about me．
Now，I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school．So I become taller and stronger than before．I like reading，too．I usually go to the library to read some interesting books．【初中三年来外貌特征及兴趣习惯的改变】Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier．【好习惯的益处】

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