Question

【题目】学校“英语文化节系列活动之英语写作竞赛”即将举行，要求大家积极投稿，以“My Hometown”为题，结合要点，完成作文。

要求：1.书写规范 2.条理清楚 3.包含所有要点 ，不少于80词。

Para. 1	Location	靠近河边的小镇，离阜宁中心不远，乘公交车大约20分钟。
Para. 2	Neighbors	有二百多户人家，相处友好，工程师分享……，医生帮助处理……，人们喜欢……
Para. 3	My home	那栋两层的楼房就是我的家，周围鲜花盛开，绿树成荫，早晨能……，我最喜欢的地方是……因为……
Para.4	你对家乡的评价，并畅想未来。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Hometown

Welcome to my hometown! It is a small town near a river. It’s not far from the center of Funing city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There’re about 200 families. All the villagers get on well with each other, they are friendly and help each other. There are many volunteers in my neighborhood. Some of them are doctors, so they can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong with your things , the engineers here can help you fix them. Look, that building with two floors is my home. There are many flowers and trees around it, My favorite place is the balcony, because I can play with my friends there happily.

My hometown is peaceful and beautiful. I love it very much! I hope my hometown will be better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我梦想的家。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，要注意句子的主语的变化及主谓一致的问题。句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is ...There are...及I hope ....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要畅想未来。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了家乡的地理位置。接下来介绍邻居及自己的家，最后对家乡的评价，并畅想未来。短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩如：It’s not far from the center of Funing city. All the villagers get on well with each other, I hope my hometown will be better.等，这里用了连词and和that，使句子结构更加复杂。