Question

假设你是Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的初中生活。

注意：1．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3．文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。

What is your school like?	20个班级； 900多位教师； 很现代；
How is your school life?	周一至周五步行上学；
每周五节英语课 最喜欢的科目是……因为……
吃健康的午餐； 很少吃零食；
What do you do in your free time?	喜欢听音乐； 擅长篮球；
周末有时打电脑游戏；
What is your feeling anout your school life?	……(自拟一点)

Dear Tom.

Long time no see ! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I'd like to　tell you about my school life.

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Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours

Mike

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom.

Long time no see ! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I'd like to　tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students.

From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. Every week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it is interesting. I have healthy lunch and I seldom eat snacks.

In my free time , I enjoy listening to music. I’m good at playing basketball. At weekends, I sometimes play computer games.

I think my school life is very interesting and colorful!

Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours

Mike

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】文章主要写初中的生活，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，如there are，From Monday to Friday，have five English lessons , like English best，In my free time，enjoy listening to music等。在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。

考点：提纲作文。