Question

【题目】写作

请根据提示写一篇题为“My Favourite Film Star”的短文，词数90左右。

1、 我最喜欢的电影明星是Peter，他是一名著名的影星，他不仅年轻而且……

2、 2015年， Peter在一部恐怖片中扮演了一名侦探。这名侦探通过查看现场……并最终抓住了杀人犯。

3、 由于Peter在这部影片中担任了重要角色且演得十分精彩，他荣获了奥斯卡最佳男演员奖(the Oscar for Best Actor)。

4、 由于他的努力…… （用2—3句话展开合理想象）

Answer 1

【答案】

My Favourite Film Star

Peter is my favourite film star . He is very famous . He is not only young but also handsome . He is very popular among fans. In 2015 ， Peter played the role of a detective in a horror film . In the film ， the detective checked the scene ，asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully ， he won an Oscar for Best Actor . He is famous around the world because of his efforts. He also helps many children in poor areas， he is great.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己最喜爱的电影明星。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如In the film ， the detective checked the scene ，asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully ， he won an Oscar for Best Actor .等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。