Question

现在的学生纷纷感到功课多，学习负担重，压力大，内心烦恼，于是不少学生特别是留守孩子(left-behind children)迷上网络，在网上打游戏(computer game)，QQ聊天，写博客（Blog)，发微信（Wechat），交网友(Internet friend)，等等。由于不能把握好利弊，消耗很多时间，导致学习成绩下滑，结果更加烦恼……。你认为怎样放松才合适呢？请你根据提示，以Learn to relax yourself 为题写一篇短文。

写作要点提示：

1. 学生压力大及其表现；

2. 学会放松很重要；

3. 最适合我的放松方式；

4. 我的建议。

写作要求：

短文的内容应包含所提示要点，语言要流畅，意思连贯，适当增加情节；短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；短文词数在90词左右。

Learn to relax yourself

 

 

Answer 1

Learn to relax yourself

       Now many students are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class.

       It's important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax yourself. For example, you can try sleeping enough, or you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends. 

      While you are studying, don't forget to relax. You may study better after a good rest.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。题目所给要点比较具体，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第二人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: under too much pressure太多的压力之下。hang out 闲逛，They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class. 他们总是觉得太累了以致不能认真听讲。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。