Question

11．在八年级即将结束之际，学校将举行一次征文比赛，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化．请为Simon准备一份100字左右的征文稿，具体内容如下：

	过去	现在
学习	不认真，成绩差	认真听讲，学到知识很开心
业余生活	大部分业余时间听音乐，看电视，上网玩游戏，	在老师的帮助下，意识到…，阅读，锻炼，
礼仪	举止不文明，乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗	举止文明，力行环保，
爱心	不关心他人，零用钱用来…	了解到贫困地区的孩子上不起学，把零用钱捐给希望工程
展望未来	相信自己在九年级会越来越棒．

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Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress（进步） in some ways．
First，I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons．But now I listen carefully in class．I am very glad to get so much knowledge．
Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teacher's help，I have realized that it's meaningless to do so．And now I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．
Third，I was an impolite boy before．I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in the public place．Now，I can behave politely．I always try to go green and I am praised by my teacher and parents．
Fourth，I cared little about others in the past．I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks，CDs and so on．But now I donate my pocket money to Project Hope because I have learnt that children in poor areas can't afford to go to school．I want to give them a helping hand．
I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9．
Thanks for your listening!．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have realized that it's meaningless to do so．我已经意识到那样做事没有意义的．
that引导的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
 I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9我确信我在九年级会越来越棒．
be sure that从句：确信…

解答 Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress．（进步） in some ways．
 First，I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons．But now I listen carefully in class．I am very glad to get so much knowledge．（学习）
 Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teacher's help，I have realized that it's meaningless to do so．【高分句型一】And now I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．（业余生活）
 Third，I was an impolite boy before．I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in the public place．Now，I can behave politely．I always try to go green and I am praised by my teacher and parents．（礼仪）
 Fourth，I cared little about others in the past．I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks，CDs and so on．But now I donate my pocket money to Project Hope because I have learnt that children in poor areas can't afford to go to school．I want to give them a helping hand．（爱心）
 I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9．【高分句型二】（展望未来）
     Thanks for your listening!

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．