Question

【题目】书面表达。（10分）

以My pen pal(我的笔友)为题写一篇60个字左右的小短文

姓名	Lisa	年龄	13
籍贯	美国 纽约 (New York)	学校	No. 3 Middle School
外貌	金黄色长卷发， 中等身材，有点胖
爱好	喜欢穿蓝色衣服，喜欢读书，下棋，游泳

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Answer 1

【答案】

My pen pal

I have a pen pal. She is Lisa. She comes from the USA. She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York. She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair. But she is a little fat. She wants to be thin. She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue. She likes reading books, playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time. She is good at her subjects. She likes helping her classmate. Both her classmates and teachers like her very much. She has many frineds. Do you want to be her pen pal?

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair. But she is a little fat. She wants to be thin. She is always in blue because her f avorite color is blue. She likes reading books, playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time.等等。