Question

【题目】书面表达

“读一本好书，就是和许多高尚的人谈话”。 在课业学习和业余生活中，你喜欢阅读吗？你喜欢读什么样的书呢？作为中学生的你，是如何看待阅读的呢？请就这个话题，谈谈你的想法和理由，并适当给出建议。

注意：1.词数：80左右

2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名

3.要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹端正，可适当发挥。

Answer 1

【答案】

I am a student. Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is full of happiness and joy. I love reading because it helps me study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge. I find reading books is a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. So I suggest that teachers should give us less homework to do so that we can have more time to read.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

写作亮点：本文语言丰富，结构严谨。用了大量的复合句：Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is full of happiness and joy. I find reading books is a good way to relax myself.特别是So I suggest that teachers should give us less homework to do so that we can have more time to read.给出了自己的建议及理由，观点鲜明。另外though，at the same time，so等连接词的使用，使文章更加顺畅，表达更符合逻辑。