Question

1．人生，就像如图所示的漫画，充满喜怒哀乐，时而恐慌，时而陷入沉思．请你以I like to be_____为题，写篇短文，叙述与上面漫画表情有关的一段故事或经历（词数80～100）．步骤与要点如下．
1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2．围绕主题，进行叙述；
3．讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历．
要求：
1．补全标题（可选择A节方框中的词汇，也可选用其他词汇） （精校）；
2．字迹工整，语言规范；
3．鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
4．文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名．
I like to behappy
Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings I'd like to be happy becausehappiness plays an important part in the world．It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．
One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．

I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以I like to be_____为题叙述与上面漫画表情有关的一段故事或经历．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2．围绕主题，进行叙述；
3．讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历．
常用到的重点短语：
play a part扮演一个角色
make sb do sth让某人做某事
make sb+adj让某人怎么样
be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
as well as 也
【高分句型】
1．I'd like to be happy ①because happiness②plays an important part in the world．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②play an important part  扮演一个重要角色．
2．①In the end I passed the exam successfully②as well as got high marks．
①in the end最后，最终．
②as well as 也，连接两个并列的同等成分．

解答 I like to be happy
      Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings．I'd like to be happy（确定主题） because happiness plays an important part in the world．【高分句型】（说明原因）It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．（进行叙述） 
         One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．【高分句型】（一段有关经历）
         I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯