Question

书面表达 (10分)

期中考试后我们将有一次春游，请根据以下表格所提供的信息向大家介绍，写一篇不少于70个单词的短文。

Time	Place	Activity
8:30 a.m.	At the gate of Zuohai Park	meet everyone
9:00 a.m.- 11:30 a.m.	In the park	fly kites, play games
11:30 a.m.	By the lake	have lunch
1:00 p.m.		go to the museum by bus
1:30 p.m.- 4:00 p.m.	Fuzhou Museum	visit the museum
4:00 P.m.		go back home

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Answer 1

Hello everyone! We are going to have a spring outing after mid-term examination. Here is some important information I want to tell you. On that day we’ll meet at the gate of Zuohai Park at 8:30 a.m. Then we’ll fly kites and play games in the park from 9:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. At 11:30 a.m. we will have lunch by the lake. After that we’ll go to the museum by bus at 1:00 p.m. We will visit Fuzhou Museum from 1:30 p.m. to 4:00p.m. And we’ll go home at 4:00p.m.

That’s all. Hope you have a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给提示写一一篇短文。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提示性作文。