Question

【题目】 书面表达

假如你是Tom，认识了位新朋友Alan。这是Alan的个人资料，请根据下面的资料写一封电子邮件，把他介绍给你的朋友Peter。

要求：1. 必须包含表格内所有信息。

2. 词数：不少于60字。

Name	Alan Brown
Age	14
Birthday	August 15th
QQ number	118574263
Family members	Father ,mother, a sister
Favorite(最爱)	Food: fish sport: basketball
School activities	1.A book sale (Oct,8th)
	2.A school trip (Dec. 14th)

Dear Peter，

I have a new friend.

I hope you like him, too.

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Peter，

I have a new friend.His name is Alan Brown. He is fourteen years old. His birthday is on August 15th. His QQ number is 118574263. There are four people in his family, his father, his mother ,his sister and him. His favorite food is fish. He likes playing sports, and he often goes swimming. There will be two school activities this term in his school. A book sale will be on October 8th. They will have a school trip on December 14th. Alan is an outgoing boy. I like to talk with him. I hope that you like him, too.

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，介绍我的新朋友Alan Brown。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：His name is…,He is ...,There are...,He likes ...,They will have ..., I hope that you...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意主谓一致。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍她的个人情况年龄、生日、QQ号，家人，爱好，最后介绍学校的活动以及我喜欢和他交谈。此处like doing sth, play sports, go swimming, a book sale, have a school trip, talk with等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。