Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是李华，给你的笔友Tom写封信告诉他你怎样使身体保持健康。60个词左右。开头已给出。建议从运动和饮食方面入手。

参考词汇：habits, be good for, do sports, keep fit, get more fruit and vegetables, favorite

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you how to keep healthy in my daily life.

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you how to keep healthy in my daily life.

I often do sports to keep healthy. My favoutite sport is running. I run every day in the park. It can help to build me up and now I feel well and look fit. Food can give us energy. I like eating more fruit and vegetables and less meat. And I also drink enough water every day. So I am very healthy, because I have healthy eating habits.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照要求给笔友写一封信，说明自己是如何保持健康的。写作中要按照题干的要求重点从运动和饮食方面进行陈述，表达出自己良好的生活习惯等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了自己的生活方式，叙述了自己是怎样保持健康的。文中所要求的运动和饮食方面都得到了说明，符合文章的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含副词、连词以及形容词比较级的准确使用为文章增色不少.如build me up，feel well and look fit.，And，also，So，more fruit and vegetables and less meat.，，学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。