Question

【题目】书面表达。

请你用英语表述下面的内容。

1.明天是星期六，同学们到医院看望Mr.Smith。

2.早上9点在校门口集合，乘公共汽车去。

3.Mr.Smith是我们的英语老师，他上周生病住院了。

4.请你建议带一份礼物，并说明理由。

要求：1.不要逐句翻译。

2.词数60—80。 be in hospital visit present

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Smith is our English teacher. He is very kind to us and teaches very well. He fell ill last week and now he is in bed in hospital. Tomorrow is Saturday. We are going to see him together. We will meet at the school gate at 9：00 tomorrow morning. Then we'll go to the hospital by bus. I think we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers will make him feel good

and happy. All of us hope our English teacher can get better quickly.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息和短语写了看望Mr.Smith过程及我们的心情。我们需要用正确的英语将文中的东西表达出来。写这篇作文时需要用到的句型都是我们在教材上学过的，同学们可能比较熟悉，如be very kind to：对……有友好；make him feel good and happy.使他感到好和幸福；hope that+从句：希望做某事。等。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文。这篇范文根据所给信息和短语写了看望Mr.Smith过程及感受。文章使用了第一人称人称写的，特别根据自己平时的积累，使用了正确的短语和句型，注意时态运用，如过去式He fell ill last week及一般现在时Mr. Smith is our English teacher. He is very kind to us and teaches very well.和将来时We are going to see him together. We will meet at the school gate at 9：00 tomorrow morning.等。小的地方也很注意，像固定短语（be in bed in hospital；make sb. feel good等）的运用等。总的来说，这篇短文内容完整，意思连贯，表达流畅，是一篇好的作文。