Question

4．A．The good old days
B．A wonderful____
要求：
1．请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同．如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写"A wonderful friend"，"A wonderful vacation"，"A wonderful place"，"A wonderful gift"等．
2．注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范．
3．不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School．
4．词数不少于60．A wonderful friend
My friend Gina is a pretty and cute girl．She has a pair of big and bright eyes．she is a healthy girl．She is the best student in her class．She always gets full marks in the exams．What's more，she can play the piano，and she sings and dances well．In every New Year's party，she plays the piano and sings sweet songs for her classmates．Everybody loves her very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：She is the best student in her class．她是班上最好的学生．the best最高级形式．原级是good．in her class在她的班里．
句型二：What's more，she can play the piano，and she sings and dances well．更重要的是，她会弹钢琴，她唱歌和跳舞好．What's more更重要的是．表示递进．play the piano弹钢琴．play+某种乐器，中间要加the．and连接并列成分．well好，修饰动词sings、dances．

解答 A wonderful friend
My friend Gina is a pretty and cute girl．（朋友名字） She has a pair of big and bright eyes．（长相）she is a healthy girl．（长相） She is the best student in her class【高分句型一】．She always gets full marks in the exams．（学习好） What's more，she can play the piano，and she sings and dances well．【高分句型二】In every New Year's party，she plays the piano and sings sweet songs for her classmates．Everybody loves her very much．（受欢迎）

点评 写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题．日常积累一些短语和词句．