Question

作为一名已参加过体育中考的毕业生，你对中考体育考试也一定有自己看法和做法，请你为学校网站写一篇稿件，与七八年级的同学们分享你的心得。内容包括：

你认为今年汕头中考体育考试满分提高到40分好吗? 为什么？

你或你的同学之前在体育考试备考中的具体做法。（至少两点）

呼吁七八年级的同学们重视体育锻炼，为体育中考做好准备。    

作文要求：

1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

  As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3 students in Shantou are 40 points this year. 

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Answer 1

As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3 students in Shantou are 40 points this year. This is good for students. We will exercise more so as to stay strong and healthy because of this new policy.

     Take me as an example. In order to get good grades in the P.E. test, I listened to the teacher carefully in the P.E. class, and did everything as the teacher showed us. What’s more, I made plans to get enough but not too much exercise, about thirty minutes every day. I also ate and rested properly to make sure that I had energy all day.

  My suggestions for Grade Seven and Eight students are as follows. First, you’d better pay great attention (attach great importance) to the physical exercise. Second, don’t wait until you are in Grade 9 to begin exercising! Make good use of your time to get ready for your PE exams now![来源:学科网

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文题材紧扣学生学习生活，使学生有自我发挥的空间。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘话题内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了大量的常用的句式和短语，如：as we all know、be good for、so as to、take me as an example、in order to、get good grades、did everything as the teacher showed us、What’s more、make sure、had better、pay attention to、make good use of、get ready for以及序数词first、second等，这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。