Question

6．Sometimes we need someone to share something with．What do you often share with others？Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic‘Sharing'．（以"分享"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文．标点符号不占格．．
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Use the following points as a reference．（以下问题仅供参考）
•When do/did you often share …with others？
•Who do/did you share …with？
•Why do/did you want to share with him/her？
•How do/did you feel？
Sharing is important for everyone of us．If everyone of us can share our experiences，knowledge and love with others，our society will develop more quilkly．
To be honest，sharing is a difficult things if we want to do it well．But we can do it from our daily life．Although we can't do it well．In daily life，we can share good things with our friends【高分句型】．We can also give a hand to others．Not only we need to do these，but also we need to share our interests with everyone．If we do it with ourselves，we will have much more new friends．It is helpful for us to do everything【高分句型】．
According to these thoughts，we can know sharing is a good habit for everyone of us．

Answer 1

分析 重点短语：
1．develop more quilkly发展更快
2． To be honest说实话
3．According to 根据
高分句型：
【高分句型一】In daily life，we can share good things with our friends．在我们的日常生活中，我们可以和朋友分享好的东西．（share sth．with sb．和某人分享…）
【高分句型二】It is helpful for us to do everything．对我们来说，做好每一件事是很有帮助的．（It's+形容词+for sb．+to do sth．对某人来说做某事…）

解答 Sharing is important for everyone of us．If everyone of us can share our experiences，knowledge and love with others，our society will develop more quilkly．
   To be honest，sharing is a difficult things if we want to do it well．But we can do it from our daily life（何时分享）．Although we can't do it well．In daily life，we can share good things with our friends【高分句型】．We can also give a hand to others（和谁分享）．Not only we need to do these，but also we need to share our interests with everyone．If we do it with ourselves，we will have much more new friends．It is helpful for us to do everything（为什么分享）【高分句型】．
  According to these thoughts，we can know sharing is a good habit for everyone of us（你的感受）．

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