Question

今天你到一家超市购物，遇见一群美国游客，在交谈中他们谈到明天想去个园参观，向你打听该园的开放时间及景点等情况。请你根据下面表格中的内容向他们作个介绍，并顺便提醒他们一些你认为参观时应注意的事项。内容要点如下：

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。

参考词汇：四季假山（Four Seasons Rockeries , 公顷(hectare)。

Hi, you guys! Welcome to Yangzhou.

Throughout history, Yangzhou has been famous for its gardens. The Ge Garden …

 

 

 

 

 

I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

 

Answer 1

Hi, you guys! Welcome to Yangzhou.

Throughout history, Yangzhou has been famous for its gardens. The Ge Garden lies in the northeast of ancient Yangzhou city. It covers 2.3 hectares and it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China .You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by youself. When you go out from the south gate of the Ge Garden, you can walk to the Dongguan Street. You can buy some souvenirs there.

By the way, I will tell you something you must remember during your visiting the Ge Garden. You mustn’t make noise in the garden or draw pictures on the wall. At last, you must remember the time of opening the Ge Garden. It is from 7:30a.m to 6:00p.m.

I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: lies in位于, it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China被誉为中国四大名园之一；You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by yourself，not…until句型的运用。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。