Question

4．某英文报以An Unforgettable Day （《难忘的一天》） 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动．
内容包括：
1哪一天让你感到难忘；
2什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，…）让你感到那天难忘；
3那一天你经历了什么；
4那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受．
要求：80-100 词；文中不得出现真实姓名及校名．
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．
It was a sunnyday．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．
After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party．
I'll never forget that day．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据自己的回忆写一篇叙事性短文，记述自己难忘的一天和一件事情．动笔前先要认真阅读写作提示，注意从四个方面进行叙述．1哪一天让你感到难忘；
2什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，…）让你感到那天难忘；
3那一天你经历了什么；
4那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受
由于是回忆性短文，故用过去时态较多，主要用第一人称．
重点短语和句型：
on the way to去某地的路上
what's worse更糟糕的是
it is the first time to do sth第一次去做某事

解答 答案：
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．（难忘的那一天）
It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject（高分句型）．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"（难忘的事情和经历）I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party（高分句型）．（影响和感受）
I'll never forget that day．（总结全文，点题）

点评 本题是考查书面表达能力，在平时的学习中要加强写作的训练，达到熟练运用的目的，书写工整，语法准确，过渡自然连贯．写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内容写，注意适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，不要犯语法书写的低级错误．