Question

Tom去年来到苏州一所学校学习，在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深，他发现该校学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如保护环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不乱扔废弃物等）

1．请你以Tom的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状，谈谈你的感受。

2．文中不得出现真实姓名，校名，词数不少于80字，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

    参考词汇：build up（建立，创建），a harmonious campus（和谐校园）impress（给…留下印象）

Dear Mum and Dad:

Time flies! I have been here for a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_______                                                                               

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Yours

 

Answer 1

【答案】

　

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.

　　The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.

　　In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.

　　Yours,

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称。

【亮点说明】这篇文章主要是在新学校的经历。文中使用了现在完成时，what引导的宾语从句，take an active part in等较高级的短语，而且还应用了不定式等非谓语动词以及使用了恰当的连接词In a word等为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。