Question

17．假如你是李华，有一批来自法国的交换生即将到你们学校学习．请你根据图片及提示词，为即将到来的交换生用英文写一篇介绍自己及家乡的发言稿．

内容包括：
1．自我介绍；
2．介绍家乡有关环保情况（save water，drop litter…）；
3．介绍家乡人民的精神面貌（friendly，hard-working …）；
4．介绍家乡的新面貌 （tall buildings，wide roads …）．
注意：
1．条理清楚，字迹工整，词数80个左右，围绕主题可适当发挥；
2．发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不记入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名和姓名．
Good morning everyone，
It's my honor to introduce something about myself and my hometown to you．
                      ．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They are friendly to each other他们彼此很友好．
be friendly to sb 对某人友好
【高分句型二】
Nowadays many tall buildings and wide roads can be seen here and there如今四处可见高楼和宽阔的路．
many tall buildings and wide roads 是see的承受者，结合can用情态动词的被动语态---情态动词+be+过去分词．

解答 Good morning everyone，
It's my honor to introduce something about myself and my hometown to you．
I'm Li Hua，15 years old．（自我介绍）My hometown is a lovely and green city．The people here have a good habit to save water．They don't drop litter everywhere．Besides，people plant many trees every year．（家乡有关环保情况）All the people here are hard-working．They are friendly to each other．【高分句型一】（家乡人民的精神面貌）My hometown is a new city．Nowadays many tall buildings and wide roads can be seen here and there【高分句型二】．（家乡的新面貌）We live a happy life here．I love my hometown．Welcome to my hometown．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．