Question

暑假即将来临，某校学生会打算在假期举行为贫困地区和受灾地区的孩子们奉献爱心的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书，号召同学们用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心。
要求：
1、文中应包含：至少两种帮助方式：这样做的目的和意义。
2、字数80～800；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
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Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
As students, we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes and toys . We can also donate some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world. We may raise money for charity by collecting used bottled, plastics, waste paper and so on , or by doing part-time jobs, such as, handing out advertisements, selling newspapers and so on. Making pen pals with them will be a better way to help deal with problems in their study.
The more we devote/do, the better world would be!
Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

解析试题分析：本题是写一篇给贫穷或受灾地区奉献爱心的倡议书，根据题目要求我们从我们的现状，贫穷地区孩子们的现状，我们如何提供帮助，为什么提供帮助，以及帮助的意义等方面去写。在写作时我们同时要注意倡议书格式，以及正确句式的使用。写作时要注重语言的连贯性和准确性。
考点：献爱心倡议书的写法。
点评：在写倡议书时，我们要注意书写的格式，同时我们要明确倡议的内容，原因和意义，写作时要注重句型结构和词汇的正确使用，注重语言的准确性和连贯性，不要使用错词或错句，提高写作的质量。