Question

5．某中学网站提出"走路去上学"的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约80-100词的英语短文．
内容提示：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同学结伴可以互相了解，相互帮助；
3．不需要父母接送，学会自理；
4．道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
5．有利于保护环境；
要求：
1要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范．
2文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分．
3开头已给出，不计入总次数，可适当发挥．
参考词汇：
be good for  有利于，each other 互相，no longer不再，crowded 拥堵
Walking to school
I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way toexercise and it's good for health．Next，it's fun to walk together withfriends every day．We can talkabout somethinginteresting and know each other better．What's more，if we walk，our parentswon't have to drive us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．There will be fewer cars in the city．Morewalking and less driving helps tomake our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．Walking to school helps usprotect the environment as well．I hope more and morestudents will walk to school．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容说说走路去上学的优点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称和第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同学结伴可以互相了解，相互帮助；
3．不需要父母接送，学会自理；
4．道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
5．有利于保护环境
常用到的重点短语：
be good for  有利于
each other 互相
what's more再者
as…as与…一样…
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
【高分句型】
1．①First of all，②walking to school is a wonderful way ③to exercise and ④it's good for health．
①first of all首先．
②动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数．
③动词不定式做后置定语修饰way．
④be good for  有利于
2．①What's more，②if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．
①what's more再者
②if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．

解答 Walking to school
    I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health．（走路有利于健康安全）【高分句型】Next，it's fun to walk together with friends every day．We can talk about something interesting and know each other better．（和同学结伴可以互相了解，相互帮助）What's more，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．【高分句型】We can learn to look after ourselves．（不需要父母接送，学会自理）There will be fewer cars in the city．More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．（道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵）Walking to school helps us protect the environment as well．（有利于保护环境）I hope more and more students will walk to school．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．