Question

【题目】书面表达10分

根据提供的要点写一篇50字作文。

要点：你叫Linda Brown .请你介绍你的姓，名，电话号码（021—8258168），介绍家庭成员（父母和一个哥哥，叫Bob）和介绍你的房间，用in. on .under 方位介词介绍你房间的的物品和物品的位置。

Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Linda Brown .My first name is Linda.My last name is Brown.My telephone number is 021—8258168.My father is a worker.He works hard every day.He walks to work because his factory is not far from my home.My mother is a teacher.She likes her students and they also likes her.My elder brother is Bob.He and I are in the same school.We go to school together every day.We have a nice room.There are two beds in our room.An alarm clock is on the desk.Some books are in the bookcase.We both like reading.Two footballs are under my bed.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是介绍自己及家人的情况，所以句子的时态用一般现在时，要注意主谓一致的问题，要注意上下文的语句的衔接，用适当的连词。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：He walks to work because his factory is not far from my home.My mother is a teacher.She likes her students and they also likes her.短文用了连词and和because等，增加了文章的亮点。