Question

6．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"A page from my diary during the National Holiday"．（以"国庆假日期间的一则日记"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Writing about something interesting what you saw，heard or met during the National Holiday．
Suggested questions：
1What interesting things did you see，hear or meet？
2When and where did you see，hear or meet？
3What do you think of it？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Every morning I had a swim with my dad in the water，which is very interesting．每天早上我和爸爸一起在水里游泳，这很有趣．which 为关系代词，引导非限制性定语从句．
句型二：We played so happily that I didn't want to come back．我们玩得很开心，我不想回来．句中含有 so…that…结构，意为"那么/如此…以致"． that 为连词，引导结果或目的状语从句．

解答 October 18，2011 Friday                                                               
Sunny
    How is your National Day？Do you have a good time？Where have you been these days？I had a nice  National Day！
    On September 29th，my parents and I flew to the beach in Dalian．It's so beautiful there that many people from all over the world are taking their vacations．Every morning I had a swim with my dad in the water，which is very interesting【高分句型一】．In the afternoon，I often go shopping with my mum．Sometimes we went fishing．
    Also，we visited the places of interest in Dalian．We played so happily that I didn't want to come back【高分句型二】．

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．