Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办迎新年庆祝活动。你打算邀请你们班的交换生David和你们一起参加。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点，庆祝活动时你们会做些什么，并就才艺展示给他提点建议。

提示词语：have a party, sing ,dance, play games, tell stories ,on time ,prepare

提示问题：

When and where are you going to have the party ?

What are you going to do in the party?

What do you advise David to prepare for the party?

Dear David,

How is it going?

I’m writing to tell you something about the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear David,

How is it going?

I’m writing to tell you something about the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. I’m writing to tell you something about the party. We are going to have the party at 2:00 next Friday afternoon at the school hall.

It will be an exciting party. Some students will sing and dance, such as some Chinese songs and English songs. Some students decide to dance with strong music, I think all the students will like it. Other students will play some games during the party. The winners can get small gifts.

Remember to be here on time. I hope you can prepare a program for us.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

2.I’m writing to tell you something about the party. We are going to have the party next Saturday morning in the dining hall. On the party, we are going to sing songs, dance and tell some stories.It will be fun. The party will begin at 9:00am. Please come on time. Before you come, you’d better prepare a programme, such as singing an English song or tell something about what you do on the New Year. Don’t forget. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

3. I’m writing to tell you something about the party. We are going to have the party at 7:00 this Friday evening at the school dining hall.

There will be lots of wonderful shows during the party. Some students will sing some Chinese songs and English songs, as well as Beijing Opera. Some students plan to dance with strong music, I think it will be exciting. Other students will tell some stories about Chinese culture. We’ll get more practice and rich experience.

Remember to come here on time. I hope you can prepare a program for us.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，也是书信作文。假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办迎新年庆祝活动。你打算邀请你们班的交换生David和你们一起参加。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点，庆祝活动时你们会做些什么，并就才艺展示给他提点建议。首先注意格式正确。本文时态主要是一般将来时。短文必须包括提示内容（When and where are you going to have the party ?/What are you going to do in the party?/What do you advise David to prepare for the party?）。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：（作文1）我写信是想告诉你关于聚会的一些事情。我们下星期五下午两点在学校礼堂举行聚会。这将是一个令人兴奋的聚会。有的学生会唱歌跳舞，比如一些中文歌和英文歌。一些学生决定跟着强劲的音乐跳舞，我想所有的学生都会喜欢的。其他学生在聚会期间会玩一些游戏。胜利者可以得到小礼物。记住准时到这里。我希望你能为我们准备一个节目。

我期待着您的早日回复。

（作文2）我写信是想告诉你聚会的情况。下星期六上午我们将在餐厅举行聚会。在聚会上，我们要唱歌、跳舞、讲故事。会很有趣的。聚会将于上午9点开始。请准时来。在你来之前，你最好准备一个节目，比如唱一首英文歌，或者说说你在新年做什么。别忘了。我期待着您的早日回复。

（作文3）我写信是想告诉你关于聚会的一些事情。我们将于本周五晚上7点在学校食堂举行聚会。晚会上会有许多精彩的表演。一些学生会唱一些中文歌和英文歌，还有京剧。一些学生计划跟着强劲的音乐跳舞，我认为这会很刺激。其他学生会讲一些关于中国文化的故事。我们会得到更多的练习和丰富的经验。

记得准时到这儿来。我希望你能为我们准备一个节目。

我期待着您的早日回复。