Question

书面表达(本题满分20分)

假如你是阳光中学的李华，即将要毕业的你，对学习和生活了三年的母校充满了眷恋和感恩，想在当地报刊上发表一篇英语文章描述自己的母校。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。

学校	①优美的学习环境。 ②现代化的操场。
同学	①相互学习，相互帮助。 ②积极参加课外活动，提高能力。
老师	①对我们的一切要求严格。 ②......(自拟一点）
感想	......(自拟两点）

要求： 

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。

2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。“……”部分需自拟。

3. 词数90个左右。

My Mother School

I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study. There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there.

Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life. We take an active part in after-school activities and it improves our abilities. The teachers are strict with us, but they are patient enough to explain everything to us. When something worries me, I often ask my teacher for help.

I’m proud I can study in this school, and I’ll remember my mother school forever.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇该材料作文，写一写自己对三年来母校的感想。本题所给材料较为详细。写作中注意从学校，老师和同学们三个方面进行叙述，并表达自己的感想。根据材料内容可知本文时态人称问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配，注意主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。