Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是Bob, 是学校志愿者俱乐部的一名成员，你计划和几位朋友进行一个cheer up sick kids in the hospital的志愿者活动。根据以下提示，写一篇短文向别人介绍这次活动。可适当拓展。开头已给出。

1. Time: on Saturday.

2. Place: the children’s hospital.

3. People: five volunteers and you.

4. How to go: by bike.

5. Activities: tell stories, teach English, sing songs and dance, give away gifts(礼物)。

As you know, I’m in the school volunteer club.

Answer 1

【答案】

As you know, I’m in the school volunteer club.

Last Saturday we went to be a volunteer in the Children's Hospital. We worked in the hall of the hospital in the morning. We gave direction to the patients, told them where to go for each department. In the afternoon, We went to the Inpatient department. I sent many toys to the kids, sang and danced with them. I also told stories to them to give them encouragement. We know for those kids they were very upset and very lonely at hospital. Other than their parents, the doctors and nurses in the hospital, they'd like to see more people around them and talk to them. If you have time, please join us to be the volunteer at the hospital. Let's send your care and love to the people who need it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用and、also，以及主从复合句如If you have time, please join me to be the volunteer at the hospital. Let's send your care and love to the people who need it.等等，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。