Question

8．假设Sally是你的好朋友，请根据下面表格的提示，以My good friend为题，写一篇50词左右的短文，介绍一下Sally，可适当发挥 

Name	Age	Birthday	Likes	Family members
Sally	14	August 29th	books，tennis， strawberries，hamburgers	father，mother，brother

My good friend
I have a good friend．Her name is Sally．She is14 years old．Her birthday is August 29th
There arefour people in her family：her parents，her brother and she．She likes Chinese
very much．She likes reading．She said books can make her relax．She likes tennis，too．She often plays tennisl with me．For food，she likes hamburgers，
strawberries and ice cream．She likes music．So she is often in the school music festivals．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There are four people in her family：her parents，her brother and she她家里有四个人，她父母，哥哥和她．
there be有
【高分句型二】
She said books can make her relax．她说书能让她放松．
said后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 My good friend
     I have a good friend．Her name is Sally．She is 14 years old．Her birthday is August 29th．（姓名年龄生日）There are four people in her family：her parents，her brother and she．（家庭）【高分句型一】She likes Chinese very much．She likes reading．She said books can make her relax．【高分句型二】She likes tennis，too．She often plays tennis with me．For food，she likes hamburgers，strawberries and ice cream．She likes music．So she is often in the school music festivals（爱好）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．