Question

2．三年的初中生活令人难忘，即将到来的高中生活更让人心生向往．你心目中的高中生活是什么样的呢？请以"What will my high school life be like？"为题写一篇英语短文，从学习方式、课余生活和交友等方面描述一下你心目中的高中生活．
要求：1文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2词数80词左右．
What will my high school life be like？
My high school life is starting．What will it be like？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope ①we will be given more free time ②so that we can learn ③how to ④make good use of time and how to⑤make our learning more effective我希望我们将会有更多的课余时间，那样我们能学会怎样充分利用时间怎样让学习更有效．
①hope后接省略了that的宾语从句．
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
③疑问词+to do sth作为learn的宾语．
④make use of…利用…
⑤make sth+adj：让…怎样．
【高分句型二】
After school，we can be provided with more activities from①which we can choose ②according to our hobbies and interest．
①which作为引导词的定语从句，which作为from的宾语，介词from提前，故which不能省略．
②according to 依据…

解答 What will my high school life be like？
     My high school life is starting．What will it be like？
     I hope we will be given more free time so that we can learn how to make good use of time and how to make our learning more effective．【高分句型一】In class，we should be encouraged to work with partners，which will help us gain the ability of cooperating with others in the future．（学习方式）After school，we can be provided with more activities from which we can choose according to our hobbies and interest．【高分句型二】（课余生活）I also hope I will make more friends and we can spend an unforgettable time together．（交友）
     What a fantastic life!I can't wait!

点评 要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．