Question

6．假如周日你和妈妈去公园，公园里有很多人，他们在做不同的事，请你发挥想像，用现在进行时描述当时的场面．（ 60 字左右 ）
A beautiful day in the park
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Today I am going to park with my parents今天我要和父母一起去公园．be going to do sth一般将来时．
句型二：．Some boys are playing football．一些男孩在踢足球．现在进行时，构成 是主语+be+doing sth．

解答 Today I am going to park with my parents（描述了去哪？）【高分句型一】．The weather is hot．So we buy three ice cream．It's very delicious．I love it very much．we seeing a lot of people there．Some boys are playing football．【高分句型二】Some girls are flying kites．Four old men are playing cards and two men are wathing them．Some old women are playing badminton．Two young men are taking photos over there．I am playing some games，mom and dad they sitting on the lawn．（都做了什么） 
    So I writing this essay!

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．