Question

根据提示，请以“ School Rules”为题， 写一篇短文：每所，学校都有规章制度 。下面是你们学校的一些规章制度，请你向一位新生Mary作一下介绍。内容包括：

1. 上课不能迟到。

2. 教室要保持(keep)干净和安静。

3. 见到老师要问好。（greet)

4. 不允许在教室里吃东西。

5. 不许在课堂上听音乐，玩游戏。

6. 不要损害花草树木。（pick flowers; climb trees）

要求：意思连贯、语句通顺。70词左右。

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

School Rules

　　  Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some  of  our school rules. Let me tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees.  

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，向一位新生Mary介绍学校的规章制度。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。为了使语言更显亲切,在写作时，本文的主语主要是用复数第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时态. 注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯,适当使用连词。

考点：说明文写作

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。