Question

5．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约90词的短文．要求完整叙述故事内容．
提示词：拐棍：stick

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画说说一个小男孩做的一件好事，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；一起拍照，发现一位失明的老人过马路，牵着木棍带着老人过马路，喊老人一起照相
 
常用到的重点短语：
take photos 照相
happen to 碰巧
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
do a good did 做了一件好事
【高分句型】
1．One day，a little boy with his father and mother were taking photos in front of a building，①when he②happened to see an old blind man going across the street．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②happen to 碰巧
2．Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa and led him by the stick in his hand to get to the other side of the street．
without介词，没有…，后加名词代词或动名词．
3．The family all laughed gleefully ①because the boy②did a good deed．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②do a good did 做了一件好事

解答 One day，a little boy with his father and mother were taking photos in front of a building，when he happened to see an old blind man going across the street．（第一幅图）【高分句型】Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa and led him by the stick in his hand to get to the other side of the street．（第二，三幅图）
【高分句型】His parents showed the boy an understanding smile．The boy asked his father to take a group photo with the old man．The family all laughed gleefully because the boy did a good deed．（第四幅图）【高分句型】

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
这篇短文不使用了大量的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实．．如a little boy with his father andmother were takeing photos in front of a building，Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa等，when等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理．