Question

俗话说，“不到长城非好汉”。你去过长城吗？一家旅游杂志邀请您写一篇介绍长城的短文，请结合自己的所学所见，写一篇80词左右的短文。

.审题思路

1. 确定体裁：由题干可知，要求写一篇说明文而非游记。

2. 总体介绍：has a history of …;It goes from west to east over mountains ...

3. 具体描述：8,850 kilometers long;six to seven meters high;four to five meters wide …

4. 影响及意义：the most popular place with tourists from all over the world;Chinese people are proud of it.

 写作提醒 在写作中用数字描述长城时，注意形容词和数词的用法。 

常用表达

1. The Great Wall is one of the greatest man-made wonders in the world.

2. Now the Great Wall becomes the most popular place with tourists from all over the world.

3. Chinese people are proud of it. 

连句成篇

根据题目要求及要点，运用作文模板，在横线上填上适当的内容。

The Great Wall of China has        over two thousand years. It is larger than any other wall in the world. It goes from west to east over mountains.

The Great Wall is about 8,850      ,six to seven meters high and four to five meters wide. It’s wide enough for ten men to walk        .Horses can also run along it,too. Ancient emperors built it to protect their part of the country. Now the Great Wall becomes       with tourists from.

It’s        man-made wonders in the world. Chinese people       it.

Answer 1

a history of; kilometers long； side by side； the most popular place； all over the world； one of the greatest； are proud of