Question

书面表达（10分）
请用80词左右为你的同龄人写一篇关于提高英语水平的短文，题目自拟。主要内容包括：
1. 要对英语学习有浓厚的兴趣；   2. 学唱英语歌曲有助于记单词；
3. 记英语日记（diary）；          4. 用英语交流，表达自己的观点

Answer 1

Learn it, love it!
　　Many friends often ask me, "How to learn English well?" I always tell them, "Try your best to like it first!" As everyone knows, nothing is difficult if you like to do it.
　　In fact, learning English is really interesting. Singing English songs is a good way to remember words. It can make you believe yourself. Keeping a diary in English is also a good way. Trying to use what you have learned to express your ideas is really great. And talking with others in English is interesting, too.
Come on, my friends.

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文,要求写一篇关于英语学习的短文。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的动名词短语，注意动名词表示抽象的反复发生的动作,如:learning English学英语;singing English songs唱英语歌曲等.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.