Question

书面表达

Use the suggested questions as clues．Write at least 80 words on the topic “To Be a Lovely Yanchengness”．(根据建议回答的问题，以“做一个可爱的盐城人”为题写话。词数不少于80个，标点符号不占格)：

Suggested questions：Why should we be lovely Yanchenese?

What should or shouldn’t a lovely Yanchenese do?

What are you doing to be a lovely Yanchenese?

To Be a Lovely Yanchenese

Answer 1

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解析：

　　(For reference)

　　Yancheng is developing quickly．Every day thousands of tourists come to visit it, so we should act well to show that the city and its people are lovely．In order to be lovely Yanchenese, we should always be ready to help others．We shouldn’t speak loudly in public places or throw litter on the ground．I want to be a lovely Yanchenese．I am now studying hard and getting ready for the future．

　　书面表达评分原则：

　　1．本题满分为15分，按5个档次给分；

　　2．评分时先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次．最后给分。

　　评分标准：

　　1．(13－15分)合理避开用生疏词汇进行分析，说明合理，语言组织精密，结构安排严谨，层次分明，无语法错淡或基本无错误。

　　2．(10－12分)能够对所提供角度进行分析，写出主要要点，语句较流畅，基本上无语法错误。

　　3．(7－9分)能够对话题加以分析、说明，但主要使用已学词汇来说明。写出基本要点，语句基本流畅，有少量语法错误，但不影响理解。

　　4．(4－6分)写出个别要点，语法错误多，只有个别句子可读。

　　5．(0－3分)写出个别单词或词组。