Question

17．Traffic rules help to keep order on the road．They also help to keep people safe．Traffic accidents killed more than 104，000people in China last year．As we all know there are more cars than before．So drivers and pedestrians （行人） must work together to make the roads much safer．
The pedestrian（行人） has as many rules to follow as the drivers．You should walk on the sidewalk（人行道） on the road．Always look carefully before you walk across the street．
If you often ride a bike，don't ride in the middle of the road or run through red traffic lights．When you ride a bike with a friend，don't look around or talk．
Drivers should slow down at the traffic lights．And the driver and passengers must always wear seat belts （安全带）．Without seat belts，they may be badly hurt in a sudden accident．
You must be careful if you have to travel in a bus．Get on or get off a bus only after it stops．When it is full，don't try to get inside，or you may fall off．
Traffic rules are road safety rules．Please remember the famous saying"Thinking about others"．

看了上面这篇短文后，请你根据下面的写作要点提示，针对同学们的真实情况，写一篇演讲稿，告诉同学们应如何遵守交通规则．
【写作要点】介绍学校大部分同学上学的交通方式．
【写作要点】
（1）介绍学校大部分同学上学的交通方式．
（2）指出同学们两种或以上违反交通规则的行为．
（3）针对同学们的这些行为，告诉大家应怎样做才安全．
【写作要求】
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、班级和姓名等．
（2）语句连贯，词数70词左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
 My dear friends，
There are more and more cars on the roads．It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．
If everyone obeys the traffic rules，there will be fewer accidents．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．
这句话使用的句型为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth；其中"it"为形式主语，代指"to obey the traffic rules"．这句话意为：对我们来说遵守交通规则很重要．
高分句型二：
If we don't obey the rules，we'll be in danger．
句中"If we don't obey the rules"为"if"引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．"in danger"意为"处于危险之中"．这句话意为：如果我们不遵守交通规则，我们将会遇到危险．

解答 My dear friends，
There are more and more cars on the roads．It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．【高分句型一】（点明主旨）
In our school，most students go to school by bike．But some of us don't obey the rules．Some ride on the left of the road or go across the road when the traffic light is red．It's too dangerous．【两种或以上违反交通规则的行为】I think we must be careful on the road．We should ride on the right instead of the left．We should also pay attention to the traffic around us and know traffic signals．If we don't obey the rules，we'll be in danger．【高分句型二】If everyone obeys the traffic rules，there will be fewer accidents．（建议）
That's all．Thank you!（致谢）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．